Sunday, March 19, 2006

Clarity


Was I thinking so loudly?

A heart absorbs the absurd
on a regular basis.

Primordial fears and poisoned
skies are

stage smoke;

but fragrant whispers from
your skin

are open windows
on relief.

And I see,
and I laugh:

I
know
nothing.


Copyright ©2006 Anna Piutti.


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24 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

wow, very strong!

Anna Piutti said...

Thank you so much!

Lorena said...

i agree, it's strong. it is also light but intense (if that makes sense).

i also like the image "fragrant whispers from your skin" sensual.

great poem anna!

Anna Piutti said...

Thank you, Lorena!
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Franc said...

I love the end of the poem. The

I
know
nothig.

is just perfect!!

I do not know how I get to this blog but I'm sure I will come back!!

Anna Piutti said...

Thank you!

Maddy said...

fragrant whispers from your skin-
is sensual and so alive.

Beautiful whisp of a poem.

So tender and smart!

Cherie! said...

This is very interesting. I am glad I stumbled upon your blog....and Italy? Hmmm.

Anna Piutti said...

Thanks to both of you :)

Luanne said...

Wow Anna... just WOW. I read it over and over again. I love its intensity... the words that you chose are perfect. This speaks to me in so many levels. Wish I could give it this someone... haha. I'm shy too shy though =p

nice work Anna!

Anna Piutti said...

Thank you so much,Luanne! :)
(Give it to whomever you want, as long as you give me credit for it :p )

Thanks again for stopping by and reading my work.

Patry Francis said...

Very sensual and mysterious.

Anna Piutti said...

Thank you, Patry.

MB said...

You've used small images, phrases to create gestures of meaning that suggest something far greater, conjure a particular emotion.

Anna Piutti said...

Thank you, Maude!

camera shy said...

very nice

great use of language
sparce
but
fulfulling

Anna Piutti said...

Thank you!

Pat Paulk said...

Fantastic poem!! "Primordial fears and poisoned
skies are

stage smoke;" Great line!!

Anna Piutti said...

Thank you, Pat!

Anonymous said...

Hi, I was out blogging and found your site. It certainly got my attention and interest. I was looking for fragrance information and even though this isn't a perfect match I enjoyed your site. Thanks for the resd!

Anna Piutti said...

You're welcome, and thank you for your comment. I hope you find the info you were looking for!

Plus Ultra said...

lovely, lovely and presious, I like all the poetry

Anna Piutti said...

Thank you, Plus!

Plus Ultra said...

Can I put your blog on my links, please reply to my blog if possible, thanks