A heart absorbs the absurd
on a regular basis.
Primordial fears and poisoned
skies are
stage smoke;
but fragrant whispers from
your skin
are open windows
on relief.
And I see,
and I laugh:
I
know
nothing.
Copyright ©2006 Anna Piutti.
poetry,clarity,knowledge,absurd
24 comments:
wow, very strong!
Thank you so much!
i agree, it's strong. it is also light but intense (if that makes sense).
i also like the image "fragrant whispers from your skin" sensual.
great poem anna!
Thank you, Lorena!
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I love the end of the poem. The
I
know
nothig.
is just perfect!!
I do not know how I get to this blog but I'm sure I will come back!!
Thank you!
fragrant whispers from your skin-
is sensual and so alive.
Beautiful whisp of a poem.
So tender and smart!
This is very interesting. I am glad I stumbled upon your blog....and Italy? Hmmm.
Thanks to both of you :)
Wow Anna... just WOW. I read it over and over again. I love its intensity... the words that you chose are perfect. This speaks to me in so many levels. Wish I could give it this someone... haha. I'm shy too shy though =p
nice work Anna!
Thank you so much,Luanne! :)
(Give it to whomever you want, as long as you give me credit for it :p )
Thanks again for stopping by and reading my work.
Very sensual and mysterious.
Thank you, Patry.
You've used small images, phrases to create gestures of meaning that suggest something far greater, conjure a particular emotion.
Thank you, Maude!
very nice
great use of language
sparce
but
fulfulling
Thank you!
Fantastic poem!! "Primordial fears and poisoned
skies are
stage smoke;" Great line!!
Thank you, Pat!
Hi, I was out blogging and found your site. It certainly got my attention and interest. I was looking for fragrance information and even though this isn't a perfect match I enjoyed your site. Thanks for the resd!
You're welcome, and thank you for your comment. I hope you find the info you were looking for!
lovely, lovely and presious, I like all the poetry
Thank you, Plus!
Can I put your blog on my links, please reply to my blog if possible, thanks
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