i really like "truth that makes trust skip a beat"nice, deep poem :)
Thank you :)
A verse that really does invoke a gasp. Thank you for "infesting my senses."
:) Anytime, Virgo!Thank you!
how true this is!
Thanks for your comment, J Andrew.
this is so gorgeous Annamy favorite so far...you are so gifted andsurgical with words and theycome out like a haunting...
Thank you so much, Maddy...I'm really glad you like it. That little thing was starting to aggravate me actually, which is why I'm pleasantly surprised that you would call it your "favorite so far" :) Thanks!
I was particularly attracted to the same line that made Lorena gasp. A very taut and powerful little poem.
Thank you, Patry! I'm glad you like it.Thanks for stopping by, too.
Thanks again, Maddy!
truth that makestrust skip a beatThis is a vivid little poem that packs a punch!
Thank you, Moose.
your words catch and hold me - they continue to speak out in my mind.
Endment -- Thank you so much for your visit and for your flattering comment.
This poem left me with the thought...Is there more than one kind of truth?
Travis - I guess there are (alas) various degrees of "truth", as well as countless ways of communicating it.
...and the use of words is not one of them. However, the use of words may perhaps point us towards the truth.
On the contrary - I believe the use of words IS a way to communicate truths.
What a beauty!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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