What I really like about your poems is the lucidity... It's not as if you'd need to scratch your head (with any hair therein) to grasp what it was really trying to say, and yet no where do they slide down the edges of the lyrical metaphors in which perhaps, they were born, dreaming into itself.Although poetry is not really my domain... I'm better off with prose myself, I felt I needed to tell you this.Smile.
this is so romantic. so well written. beautiful.
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I love the words...They are simple yet intense!
"the song of our stepsbeing poured intothe taste budsof the earth."Lovely....
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